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re: Critique mon bio, si vous plait
by Talia_Rachel on 2012/05/22 4:46:04 am
I like that a lot. It adds a depth and motive to the character, that a list of dates and battle honours would not convey. I have tried to do a similar approach with mine, but at the moment it is in a very rough draft format.
Thanks for sharing and prompting me to re double my efforts to finish mine.
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re: Critique mon bio, si vous plait
by Skonn on 2012/05/22 9:44:00 am
Nicely done, my friend! You've quickly established the era Kerr comes from, as well as his purpose for being in the future, and his mission and motivation.. I look forward to hearing more!
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re: Critique mon bio, si vous plait
by TamReese on 2012/05/22 9:45:37 am
love it.
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re: Critique mon bio, si vous plait
by mark (James Bailey) on 2012/05/22 11:07:51 am
I really like the Format you have set up here. It is nice to get to know Kerr a little better ;)
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